First Name:Merel
Middle Name(s):Freya
Surname:Johanson

Age:16
Birthday:28 February (11.55 PM, phew)
Year:Sophomore
Nationality:50/50: Half Swedish (father) Half Dutch (mother)

Major:Dance
Minor 1:Art
Minor 2:Musical Theatre

Appearance:
Merel is a very tall girl, she has slender arms and legs. Her skin is pale, and she has a couple of birthmarks. She has silky long blonde hair. All natural. She has twinkly blue eyes and soft pink lips. Her eyebrows are thin and blond which gives a bit of a desperate look. She has a little split between her upper teeth. This gives a stubborn look to her face. Over all, this girl has the Nordic Female Viking look. All from mother nature. Merel is mostly wearing dance clothes. She doesn't really care about her clothing. ((a bit short, had a two month rp'ing break))
Personality:
Merel is a very open-hearted person. She loves talking, and she can be quite annoying. She can talk a whole day, in three different languages. Merel can't sit still and is always busy doing things. She is working on people their nerves sometimes. Merel is a confident person, she knows her good points and her bad points. She becomes jealous very easily, this caused a lot of friendships to end. Her friends mean a lot to her, even though she seems quite outgoing it's hard to make friends. She appears very arrogant and careless to other people. This frightens a lot of people.
History:
Merel was born in the old neighbourhood Luthagen in the city Uppsala, Sweden. Her father was a Swedish business man and her mother was a piano teacher. Merel had three big sisters and one little brother. The family seemed warm and cosy, it was. They had a very big couch in their house, on which the whole family could relax. Every Saturday evening the family sat together on the couch, they watched the nicest Disney films in Swedish and some were in Dutch. The all time favourite of the family was 'The Sleeping Beauty'. The parents of Merel found it important that their children learned Dutch and Swedish. Merel always spoke Dutch with her mother and she spoke Swedish with her father.

Merel her mother brought her once to a Ballet Show in Stockholm, Merel fell in love with Ballet. She was only four years old and already knew her future dream job. Merel got ballet lessons, she did a lot of practise herself at home. Merel was extremely happy when she was dancing, even though her face didn't show that. At the age of seven, Merel moved with her family to Anna Paulowna, Netherlands. It didn't feel like home, the country was flat and small. It took a long time before Merel like the Netherlands. Merel got ballet lessons in Alkmaar, the biggest city near Anna Paulowna. Ballet was still her passion and future dream job.

Roleplay Sample:
(( this is the rp of Emmy Stormbranch (one of my accounts on that site) in the library of Hogwarts))
Emmy stepped into the library. The library had a mysterious atmosphere, all the pages of books she had not yet read. She wondered if she could ever read them all, she wished she could. Did the wisest woman or man of the world exist.If it existed was it a muggle or a witch or wizard.Could you ever know all the knowledge which was created. You knew everything if you knew everything of every single person in the world how he brushes his or her teeth how he or she thinks about a certain subject and what he or she is doing right now. If such a person existed,didn't it get mad of all the knowledge coming into its head? Emmy was a Ravenclaw but didn't wish to be the wisest person of the entire world,entire universum or whatever would be next. Emmy walked to one of the bookshelfs and gave her eyes some time to read all the titles. She didn't even know what kind of book she would read. Leprechauns,Fairies,Demonic Creatures,Trolls,Animagus' for dummies,mermaids to much titles!Her head was spinning because she wanted to read them all!Emmy her eye fell on a purple book,the title was in silver shiny letters.The book its title was 'Magic in the Oldest Times' why did this book interest her,she had History of Magic so why would she pick a book like this? It didn't matter she wanted to read it like ASAP. She almost ran to one of the tables where nobody sat.She opened the book and a dusty cloud filled her space.Emmy sneezed as the dust came into her nose. She immediately looked if there was no fierce looking Library miss.As she saw nothing she started to read the first sentence.How it all started, how interesting. Emmy read on and let the yet unknown knowledge come into her head.

Accepted!

Just one little thing - in your rp sample, you haven't left spaces after commas and full stops, so just keep an eye on that when you're roleplaying.