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Schuyler Zonian
First Name: Schuyler
Middle Name(s): Ellie
Surname: Zonian

Age: 16
Birthday: February 6
Year: Sophmore
Nationality: American

Major: Writting
Minor 1: Photography
Minor 2: Music

Appearance: Schuyler has a normal appearence and body. Nothing too special about her, exept the sparkling eyes. She is otherwise very plain when you pinpoint each feature, but still carries a natural beauty about her in a whole. Her hair is often colored diffrently and she chooses to dress whichever way she pleases.

Personality: She often comes off as a happy person, but her mood changes from joyful to melancholy in minutes within a downing event. This is primarily due to her bipolarism. But with medication she can wthstand a normal teenage persona. Without it she can be a nervous breakdown at the point of which is dangerous for herself. Mostly on account of her mother's death. Her nerves had been wracked ever since.

History:

Schuyler was born in New York city on the night of February 6, 1992. Both her parents were proud to have brought such a beautiful child into the world. Unfortunetly her parents were only in their teens when Schuyler was born. Her father an aspiring musician and mother trying to get a book published was not a good financial setting to raise a child in. Thinking better of their daughter her parents gave up their dreams and found a bit better paying jobs, still on minimun wage, but nontheless more than before.

Growing up Schuyler watched her parents struggle together never giving up hope. That is until the year 2004 when her mother was diagnosed with cancer. 3 months later her mother was pronouced dead. Her father was emotionally distraught and fell into depression quitting his job altogather. Sky is led to beleive it is this event that brought on her bipolarism. Her father stayed in his room for nearly a month before Schuyler came knocking at the door. There she found her father in a mess of a room with papers scattering the floor. Most fillied with lyrics of sorrow, others with old love letters. Schuyler tried to comfort her father who was sprawled out n the bed staring at the ceiling. Her attempts were futile as he just lie there. She tried again to make him respond but he continued to ignore her. Sky quickly searched threw the closet and found his old guitar case buried in the back. She quietly lifted open the lid and took out the old instrument. Schuyler carefully padded over to where her father lie and placed the guitar gently next to him. He looked over and smiled the thing bringing back old memories of the times he shared that were happy. He sat up and raised it to his lap. A soft melody filled the house as Schuyker sat on the floor releived to revive her father if only for that moment.

After that day her father gradually got over the fact that, that was his life now. He cleaned himself up and continued to raise Sky the best he could. Her mother had left many writting behind though. Sky studied them when her father tried to throw them out. Sky herself was fascinated and took up writting herself. That along with her father's tryings to teach her guitar led to her exeptance in art school in London.

Schuyler went to live with her relitives across the sea in London. She brought her most valuables along with her. These include her camera, journal, and her own guitar. During her stay with her foster family she practiced her writting and joys she had carried from her other life.

Roleplay Sample:

"Mom!" nine year old Schuyler cried out in the super market. Her mother was nowhere down the isles and not in the pristine white bathrooms. She searched them one more time trying to avoid the stares of curious people.

She scrambled down the frozen food section and wrapped her arms around herself in the cold air. "Mom?" she called out again hoping her mother would come around the corner and answer back. Suddenly all the noise from the checkout lines stopped and so did movement all togather.

Schuyler was afraid walked quickly to the front of the store to see everyone gone. "MOM!" She called out again. No one answered back. She ran up and down the isles letting the cold air conditioned air hit her tear stained face. When she was sure she had searched everywhere Schuyler sank down to her knees in the middle of the wearhouse and wept.

Schuyler awoke with a start. Sweat dripping from her face as she lept up and shivered the dream away. She walked to the small bathroom and splashed water onto her face letting it clear her mind all togather. The nozzle to the shower gave in as she turned it on. Schuyler stripped down and climbed into it with its comforting warmth. Soon she found herself on the floor weeping bitterly with the awful reminder of her mother. The nightmare was just one out of many.
Admin
Just a couple of little things for you to look at.

Your character seems to have a VERY angsty past and while I've nothing against that, it really does seem quite extreme. If you do want to keep this history, then I'd require a bit more in the personality section.

Also, there are a few typos scattered around your app, so just be sure to keep an eye out for them. biggrin.gif
Schuyler Zonian
Hmm. I thought about the history thing :/ Maybe I'll keep the dad?

I'll get to it thanks!
Admin
Okay, this is fine now. Welcome! biggrin.gif

Feel free to start roleplaying!
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